Friday, March 29, 2013

The Time Machine Comments

Rating: 4.5

Trembling with anticipation,
I enter in the time machine;
Going back in precious time,
to be whom I had been.
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Bellis Perennis
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suman 13 January 2020

i want to know the summary of this poem

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Paul M. 05 August 2018

This is a lovely poem. I disagree with the previous commenter. I really enjoy how the simplicity of your words and structure reflect the simple, pure emotions you convey throughout the poem. You have a very nice touch for diction and tone.

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Harry Hegwicks 09 November 2017

Nice.But little simple in words if you ask me

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