The Town Poem by Shelby Gosser

The Town



the darkness falls over this little town
where it was once a bright and sunny place
where the trees are green
and flowers are brightly colored with
the colors of blue, red and yellow
the sun is golden and warm
but now that same sun is black and cold
and that town is blackened with the darkness
not for long it is almost morning

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Mueller 22 February 2007

interesting choice of a theme through your poems. but i think that this one could use a little bit of a stronger ending. keep it up -Heather

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