The Traveller Poem by Premkumar Khumanthem

The Traveller

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From the open window, I saw the one
Who travel from a far track
Started he since the morning sun
But the track found to be mistake
Searching for the right track
But could not climb up the good stake

From the open window, I saw the one
Again the one who lost the way
It was the time when the cloud was struck by the sun
Started to walk for the day
Found a match with trust each other very much
And change all his life in a clutch

From the open window, I saw the two laughing
Who travel in a smooth way
It was the time when the sun was setting
Climbing up the stair to there home way
So charm, so thrill that they were so happy
Led by a good saturn, in a mood of laughy

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chris G. Vaillancourt 02 February 2011

Brilliant piece. loved it.

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Faith Ali 31 January 2011

Nice poem, I like it, , keep it up and show us more regards, Faith..

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Premkumar Khumanthem

Premkumar Khumanthem

Wangjing, Manipur(India)
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