Monday, September 22, 2008

The Ugly Comments

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You think you’re like so hot
A real looker lookin top notch
With layers of makeup caked on your face
Powder and rouge all over the place
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P.R. Prosper
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Macy Anne 25 September 2008

Usually when I read poems like this with lots of sentences without much paragraphs, I don't even bother reading it, but after this, I loved it. From the very beginning I kept reading and reading. It was like a speech but better. It came from your heart and not only that it was smart

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