The Ultimate Poem by drishti magoo

The Ultimate

Rating: 5.0


Closer I feel today
To my soul
To my silence
To my self

Life goes on and on
The eyes spread wide
The broad horizon

Looking outside
Searching around
For the Ultimate

Higher to reach
Above the all
Immodest desires


Unhappy the heart
The tired searching eyes
Tired searching the eyes
restless still the urge…

O man of wisdom
O man of destiny
Search in the self
Search in the soul

The Ultimate…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saurabh Nagpal 26 February 2010

Another Shot ~! ! ! ! :) But wat is it about exactly~! ? ? ? ? Really About the goal or about the utimate soulmate~! ? ? ? ? ? ? ? OR is it so...., dats why u left a blank space after ultimate, so that people could understand it according to wat extent theycud think of it~! ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 30 October 2009

Wonderful and encouraging. Keep writing!

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Tai Chi Italy 30 October 2009

I would have put 'goal' after The Ultimate...but that's me. You certainly scored a goal with this fine poem... We have to search our own souls to find ourselves and ultimately...our happy whole. Smiilng at you Tai

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