The Unwritten Poem by Mark Ruiz

The Unwritten

Rating: 4.5


I find myself at a stalemate.
Between what's locked deep inside,
And the obvious around me.
Eyes shut though,
Senses numb.
My mind is whom I rely on,
Still even he is at a loss
Of words, emotion, expression.
These I can't speak nor write
And yet I find myself here,
Again, lost in this sea.
Sea of words in which I'm floating,
Not swimming or drowning.
I wish the water I would splash
On notebook or ink equally.
To share these thoughts.
Still I find no words
No idea, no punchline.
Another day...
And they will come.

Thursday, April 13, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: loss,senses,swimming
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Julia Klimenova 13 April 2006

Don't underestimate yourself. You have found the words, and they are right and appropriate. Keep it up. Julia

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