Thursday, March 17, 2016

The Weeping Comments

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Little bullets hit me all over
I shake because you should come over
A trick of the brain sets me in motion
I feel like I know me, I feel like the ocean
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Britt Veloso
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Dr Antony Theodore 01 July 2017

I feel like I know me, I feel like the ocean Solitude captures me too much I'm just the crazy girl who wants a tear on her cheek i want to love and to be loved. i want it. In stead they reapply make-up for dates in vain.. hill in pain, . so many wonderful expressions i collected from your poem. very nice and very expressive and original way of writing. God bless u. thank you. tony

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