Thursday, January 2, 2003

The Wilted Rose Comments

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I once observed a wilted Rose
Clipped before its time
How sad it was to see
It broke this heart of mine
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Dan J. Najvar
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Silence Dogood 24 December 2008

You made a typo with secret I think anyways otherwise excellent poem well written and well put

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Dan J. Najvar

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Lake Jackson, Texas, USA
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