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Thank you everyone for positive response This is encouraging me think more and to write better

Your English is very good and your thoughts are clear. Well done. Like my friend, Jayatissa said, keep writing and you will continually improve

Beautiful poem i like it so much.Thanks for sharing

all great wishes........ i wish for a boy who is smart and a girl so lovely and smart................ we all live in wishes and some may be fulfilled, some not.......... that is life....... to write and express ourselves and our wishes we have poetry... novel......... thank you very much for this poet dear poetess. tony

When I read both your poems and your note, I thought its OK to respond. I feel, you have all ingredients to master poetry. What is needed is to sharpen them. PH is an ideal platform for that, Priya. Good luck!