Wednesday, May 20, 2009

The World Is A Better Place Comments

Rating: 4.5

The world is a better place

Oh! What a wonderful place.
Every morning the nature will glaze:
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Innocent Seilane 03 June 2009

the word is a better place indeed and with such optimistic write, good poetic technique and relating the first stanza with the others i should say your poem is fantastic! ! ! ! ! 10+ for this poem

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