I can't forgive her for stealing your poetry from us,
the ones you didn't live long enough to write.
Never mind that she stole your husband, your happiness
and peace of mind, which nobody is promised.
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This sounds a lot like my views! I was drawn into this piece from the beginning. You have used such a mix of lovely word choices and a bit of biting sarcasm and strength. I even see a touch of melancholy in it. I tend to really write with the same viewpoint so I easily followed along and found myself even nodding in agreement. A wonderful piece Patti. I will be reading more. Thanks for the great read!
good poem.......to say the least