Then I Can Look After Them More Poem by Wei Chao

Then I Can Look After Them More

Rating: 5.0


Coming off offshore drilling rig,
After the four-week rotation,
It's like a relief from a brig,
I'm drained, I need relaxation.

After the four-week rotation,
A roughneck's life on oil patch ride,
I'm drained, I need relaxation.
It's a tough job, but I take pride.

A roughneck's life on oil patch ride,
I started right after high school,
It's a tough job, but I take pride,
It's time for my online school.

I started right after high school,
Need to support my younger three,
It's time for my online school,
My goal is an uni degree.

Need to support my younger three,
I didn't spend a penny offshore,
My goal is an uni degree,
Then I can look after them more.

I didn't spend a penny offshore,
I need saving, we'll buy a house,
Then I can look after them more,
No more renting, we'll buy a house.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Wayne 05 July 2022

Excellent work! The realism and imagery you paint of a hard working young man looking out his families future is vivid and touching. Keep up the good work!

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Wei Chao 06 July 2022

Thanks for commenting and liking.

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