Sunday, February 28, 2016

Theory Of A Dying Man Comments

Rating: 5.0

Body squelched in tears
Soul drowning in fears
Stokes to know he's not numb
Bleeds to know he's alive
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Paras Saxena
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Rajnish Manga 03 January 2017

You have nicely put across the psychology of a dying man- for whatever reason- through his actions and fears. New subject with a refreshing treatment. Thanks.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 28 February 2016

Since man is mortal and death is certain one should not get depressed by the thought of death or even when one is on death bed. Birth and death are two definite destinations in every one's life, hence, death too demands a sort of celebration as one is willfully granted to birth. Off course this theory is quite difficult to digest when on death bed. Beautifully envisioned thought provoking poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Paras Saxena 29 February 2016

it's a theory about a man who is dying of a terrible disease(eg. cancer) and that's why it has to be so.. thank you for your comment.

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