Friday, April 8, 2005

There Was An Old Man In His Eighties (Limerick) Comments

Rating: 5.0

There was an old man in his eighties
Who desired to love younger ladies.
He puffed and he panted,
Yet they were enchanted
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Dennis Lambert
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Poetry Hound 08 April 2005

I like it, although the meter is off on the last line.

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