Thinking... Poem by Dustin Bradley

Thinking...



Just the other night, as I layed in my bed,
and thought of the beauitiful things she has said,
of places she's seen, and books she had read,
and all of the interesting lives she had led;
I wanted to tell her, but can't out of fear,
all the things I'm to shy to say when she's near;
not the sad stories, but the things that make me,
and the person inside that no one else see's,
of the conflict inside that never let's be,
and the love that's inside that needs to be free;
I know, I decided, I'll write her a poem,
with the words and descriptions that no one else owns;
so I picked up a pencil, and I started to write,
about my angels and demons that always seem right,
or the demise of my hope that's never in sight,
and my respect for the day, and my love for the night;
So much anger and saddness in this world made of lies,
but I never can see that when I look in her eyes;

-The love for a stranger is always unwise...

Wednesday, July 27, 2011
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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I was a teenager when I wrote this. Age: 17. There was a girl in my class and I thought she was so pretty. Whenever we talked, I would try to express myself, but always felt like I came off bad. In the end, it never worked out and I realized it was probably a good thing.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 16 August 2014

That last refrain tied it together, almost like an afterthought. Read mine - Everybody has had Somebody - Adeline

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Jacob Coleman 27 July 2011

'Love anything and your heart will be wrung and possibly broken. If you want to make sure of keeping it intact you must give it to no one, not even an animal. Wrap it carefully round with hobbies and little luxuries; avoid all entanglements. Lock it up safe in the casket or coffin of your selfishness. But in that casket, safe, dark, motionless, airless, it will change. It will not be broken; it will become unbreakable, impenetrable, irredeemable. To love is to be vulnerable.' C.S. Lewis

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