Friday, June 6, 2014

Thinking Of You Comments

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whats left of those old blue jeans
is the size of a bean
he done went and twisted us up
i kinda wish he didnt
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Hailey Stump
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Colleen Courtney 07 June 2014

So much feeling and emotion pours from this poem. After reading the poet's note I now understand even better why. How sad to be torn from a sibling. Wish you happiness for a brighter future.

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Gajanan Mishra 06 June 2014

very good writing, thanks, I like it. please read my poems and comment.

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