Thinking Of You Poem by Holly Moon

Thinking Of You

Rating: 5.0


If thinking of you brings you to me,
You would always be with me.

If only I could manifest you in flesh, I would.

If wishes do come true,
Then I must not be wishing enough.

If this were also true for you,
Then you do not wish me at all.

It's the reason why I don't wish you more.

Friday, September 26, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love hurts
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 28 September 2014

Your use of IF and SIMILE in the poem brought out the essence of the piece. You captured the feeling of love right there in the inner recesses of your heart. A lovely and well articulated poem. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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