This Life Poem by Abby Rose

This Life

Rating: 5.0


People grow up
Knowing they going to die
So why do we beg for more time

We go through life
Feeling like we don't shine
Ain't it just a waste of time

We hide our tears
We cover our fears
Just to keep our pride

Whats the use of this life
When we can't even win the fight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 15 April 2012

Impressive! Those who are greedy, selfish and lack of a high spirit are totally losers by any means! You raised poignant questions that are also thought provoking! Like I mentioned in my poem: Only Today Counts, these type of people are real losers but we are not like that because we show our great concern for humanity! Yes, life is worth living as long as we maintain our feet on the ground, our minds alert and our hearts open! I love this amazing write that clearly shows your concern for life and your poetic talent! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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