Friday, October 13, 2006

This Map, Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

THIS darkness splinterd my light,
leaving my muscle and bone sore
to the touch, but alive, still your
beatifull shadow breaks my fall.
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Sinnaminsun Sinnaminsun 13 October 2006

My favorite line is your first :) Very unique introspection.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 13 October 2006

So many awesome lines in such a succinct piece....excellent write David...(10) '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Ruby Root 13 October 2006

Very creative David. Excellent poem. Take care.

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