Allen gill

Rookie (07-03-1991 / Cleveland)

This Pain I Feel - Poem by Allen gill

Flowing like a river cold as the arctic I feel so alone solem and weak I feel dead inside like fish out of water like the dying farmer stung by lifes scorpians I see myself cry within but now i see it in the mirror I'm so cold inside I cant hide the pain it just pours out my eyes tears of sorrow I cant retain Im the one to blame im broken and unabel to be fixed


Comments about This Pain I Feel by Allen gill

  • anurag duggal (10/6/2008 10:00:00 AM)

    wow a great expression of loneliness...love the comparson with the arctic and the farmer......keep up the good work..god bless (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 6, 2008



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