Those Eyes Poem by Lycko Chizo

Those Eyes

Rating: 4.9


You have no eyes
You can't see
Your vision are clear
But you're blind to me
Yes you see me smiling
But I'm trully sad
You see me laughing
But you can't see the loneliness that I have
Yes I'm so strong and tough at your sight
But the truth is am dying inside
Why does your vision is only for superficial?
Don't you bother to view the internal?
Come closer look
at me
Your eyes are wide open
But why can't you see?
Are you trully blind?
Or just closing your eyes?
For you not to see what you have done
You had killed me several times
And today I'm alive for you to kill me again sometime
So I take a look at those eyes
I see a picture of pure kindness
Your eyes are liar
But it seems to be real
Well those eyes proved your innocence
But how about your conscience?
Yes you have a beautiful eyes
Full of lies
But when will that eyes can trully see?
When will it be open for truth and reality?
When will it be?
When will it be?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kristi . 22 August 2009

Yeah I can see the similarities between our poems; I can feel the pain in yours too. You’ve expressed the emotions in this poem really well. It’s horrible though isn’t it, how someone can hurt you so much and it seems as though they don't even realise. Very nice poem! :)

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But you're blind to me Yes you see me smiling But I'm trully sad You see me laughing But you can't see the loneliness that I have it is baffling me and making joke of it.. read inmy eyes.. oh dear so lovely write...10 rad mine two bright eyes... and brown eyes

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Marieta Maglas 08 July 2009

''Are you trully blind? Or just closing your eyes? '' interesting poetic stuff....nice poem

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Ted M 08 July 2009

Your writing potrays real hurt feelings.

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