Thought Of Death Comments

marvelous penned.so many volatile deep feelings which are pure and honest. i agree with these three sorts you divided about the first and second you are right.but about the third we have a little confliction.i believe that the third group also become sad because of themselves.suppose a father has died.the child becomes sad because of him/herself not because of the father or mother. anyway the ending of your poem is really something else.i like it very much.val ~nb