Saturday, February 9, 2008

Thought You Knew Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lofty dreams falter and tumble to the ground
Skies scream dark and cold when you’re not around
Winds blow my mind and the sea fries my soul
Rain is like sharp needles and muscles lose their control
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Arthor Journer
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R R 03 March 2008

Completely understand - when something precious for us suddenly disappears, the pain is beyond word, but your description is so vivid, and your poem is so powerful. Great poem, great poet!

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