Thoughts Of An Overthinker Comments
I think all day, I think all night, it whirrs around my head.
I know it's not that good for me;
I'm always full of dread.
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stanza 4 might SOUND better (rhymewise) , but DON'T CHANGE 'far' to 'fart'.
i THINK one or more additional comment from me are on their way, and another disappeared before being sent. Crap! !
whirr: 'To move or vibrate (something) with a buzzing sound' (one definition)
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4/1/2026 10:51:05 PM # 1.0.0
I had to read ooem twice before i finally got a laugh form last two lines. I 'get it' now. : ) bri