Thursday, April 15, 2010

Thoughts Of My Mind Comments

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Most nights I lay awake,
thinking of what happens in this world,
how everyone gives and yet everyone takes,
just like a coffee and how it is swirled.
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Tessa Marsland Pettigrove
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Emily Oldham 12 July 2012

Especially like the line how the sun hugs the atmosphere. However not sure why you need the date at the start? Great poem!

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