Three Wishes Poem by David Ritter

Three Wishes

Rating: 5.0


Three Wishes

I went for a walk
Beneath a lonely night sky
I was missing my love
When a glimpse caught my eye
A shooting star fell
From the heavens, dark above
So I closed my eyes and made a wish
For my long-lost love

I saw a fountain pool
While strolling through a mall
Reached into my pocket
The fountain seemed to call
I tossed a shiny penny
Closed my eyes and made a wish
To once again, very soon,
Feel her gentle kiss

Then it was my birthday,
And Mother baked a cake.
Before I blew out candles,
I had a wish to make.
Wherever you are, my love,
Wherever that may be,
Know how much I love you.
Please come back to me.

Three Wishes
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tracey Collins 21 August 2006

wow a nice rite.... it`s nice when your three wishing come true....and your true LOVE comes to you......

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K. Jared Hosein 21 August 2006

A sweet and hopeful piece about finding or rediscovering love - the longing that is employed by the narrator taking every chance he gets to wish for it. - K.

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David Ritter

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Flint, Michigan
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