Tidepool Poem by Shane Markie

Tidepool

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When my own soul so pure and undefiled starts to sink

Beneath the polluted ocean of society's morass,

I look into the eyes of those whose souls are unencumbered with such stink

And then I think to be released from such displeasure as was wrought upon the anvil of my heart would make my soul more crass.

Friday, December 22, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: ocean
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Shivapriya Surve 23 December 2006

AMAZING stuff, Shane! ! ! I love the thought expressed in the last lines....yeah! society's morass does work like a soul-rinsing detergent! Hats off to u! ! !

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