Till The End Of Life! Poem by kaitreena stwert

Till The End Of Life!



As par the time passes away
You and I became lover of each other,
You are the One who is my mirror Image
And I feel proud that So beautiful in that image.

I am destination and I am your way
But you are my life, my Love, Tears of all days and nights,
Today I had cry but not because of you my love
That tears were for my loneliness.

I feel that I can live my life till the end with you
You are very beautiful like rainbow and stars,
You are so great as sky is!
Till the end of life I always wants to be with you.

I loves your each and every picture
I am very lucky princess that I have very impressive,
Dashing, and gorgeous Prince like you
Your Cinderella is waiting to live her life
With You in the journey of Till The End Of Life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Harindhar Reddy 26 October 2011

True depiction of love is potrayed in the poem. This poem is one the best poems of the poetess. I really like the below lines for it carries original human nature without sugarcoated words.Great artistic writing......... I am very lucky princess that I have very impressive, Dashing, and gorgeous Prince like you Your Cinderella is waiting to live her life With You in the journey of Till The End Of Life. This line are contrasting to all love showered in the poem. This how pure the love of the poet and she misses her lover much. and further it is human nature is artfully explained when she said your CINDERELLA is waiting to live her life. The element of contrast fits as fit as horse here. Many wishes to the poet for sharing her feeling and poem at the same time. Cheerio! for now...................

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