Time Poem by mehedi faysal
Time
Another day of life
Fade like leaves in winter!
As I grow up,
I learn to forget Fear!
Life lost its charm
As I grow older!
Seems nights are turning colder!
Good friends turn in to hypocrites!
Soon they will fade
Like unknown face!
People changes in changed time!
Pomes has lost it charm
Give up it yard
For cheap jingle and rhyme!
As days passes
I feel love is like dusk!
Colored men’s life for a while.
Then bring dark night!
Men born in woman’s womb,
Then give her heart and soul
To pay his debt, through eternity!
I know you cry like me,
I can hear your whisper in wind!
I don’t know like you,
What the time will bring?
But I know I will remain who I am!
Like the mighty sea,
If you come in my misty city
You will always find me!
I shall wait for you through eternity!
I shall watch great leader to born and fall.
As time will shatter on my cursed wall!
An amazing composition with nice metaphors, love it.10++
great poems Mehedi i hope you continue as a poet and continue writing these very deep and defying poem. keep me posted
The whole is nice, less gramma mistake (even fragment too) and smooth, I like the last three lines, sentences: I shall wait for you through eternity! I shall watch great leader to born and fall. As time will shatter on my cursed wall! . (Very good in a whole.) I offered with 10+10.
good good very a natural if you will i like it
I really liked your poem, I liked how you identified with your readers and showed that they might be going through the same kind of situation 'I know you cry like me, I can hear your whisper in wind! I don’t know like you, What the time will bring? '
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/23/2024 5:50:51 PM # 1.0.0.1119
nice poem. there are a few grammer errors but other than that its really good