Thursday, October 30, 2008

Time Has Taken Them Away Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am a man who lives in yesterdays,
in a world of worn out photographs
with faces I want to remember
but more often that I can’t.
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David Harris
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Tom J. Mariani 16 November 2008

As I said a long time ago, your poems evoke. Time has created the memories and left them with you. I've been 'away' from poemhunter for a long while. You are one of the many I have missed reading. But the other like I have is some times a demanding one. Like my college eng. lit prof. told me many years ago, 'If you want to be writer there are two things you have to have: 1) patience and 2) if you like to eat on a regular basis, a day job. Cheers, Tom

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Alison Cassidy 31 October 2008

A sweet whimsical piece penned with honesty and without too many words. Excellent poem David. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Tsira Goge 30 October 2008

But time is the most ruthless a predator, which itself is, as invisible the illusionist... 10........ Sincerely, Tsira

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