Tuesday, November 20, 2012

Time To Let Go Comments

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You walked into my world of entertainment but you decided to make your own show..
You walked into my world of music but decided to make your own lyrical flow...
You ran into my world but i decided to walk slow...
You ran into trouble but i decided its time to go...
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Yahya Ahmed
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Tiger Lily Love 29 December 2012

I LOVED this. Its short and sweet and really packs a punch. The illustrations of entertainment and music are lovely, and that concluding line was my favorite line. You don't really care where he goes because you've let got. Great write! :)

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Unwritten Soul 07 December 2012

It sound like moving and moving dont stop walking...it is a nice theme and encourage the heart to keep positives-Soul

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