Saturday, October 15, 2005

Tinkle Comments

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She saw him
in the paddock,
had put his tools
and wire down,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Ulrike Gerbig 15 October 2005

if you only take the first stanza, this would be a very beautiful and strong poem. 'Tinkle She saw him in the paddock, had put his tools and wire down, to take a breather. While doing that he let the old fellow, trusty appendage, have his relief, and rain fell unto ground that had expected but given up its long-held hope some thoughts ago.' u.

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