Thursday, May 22, 2014
'Tiramisu' Comments
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Stings I feel,
They come and they go,
Like heels walking on my chest,
Pain it is...
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Loyd C Taylor Sr
22 May 2014
You feel enlightened was a good way to end this piece, I enjoyed, Loyd
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2/28/2026 2:43:04 AM # 1.0.0
I love this piece for it asks the same question I spend hours contemplating on myself! Which is why am I here? What is my purpose? Unfortunately I'm still working on finding my true enlightenment! Bût I love how you ended the poem with that glimpse of it! ! ! ! ! !