Thursday, July 2, 2015

Tired Sparring Comments

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When he found me I felt warm inside, I felt safe
I knew he wanted to help
but didn't know how
His eyes felt sorry for me
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Amanda Marie Swiatek
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Roseann Shawiak 02 July 2015

Beautiful and tender sentiments of someone learning to trust, yet not quite ready to reach out. Seeing the one who wants to help, yet feeling they're an opponent, leaning on them, hearing only the silence because trust has not yet developed between them. This is what came through to me as I read your poem. Am I anywhere near close in my thoughts? In any case this is a really good poem, honest and raw emotion. Give it 10 - 10's if I could. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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