Title: When The Sky Breaks Open Poem by ashok jadhav

Title: When The Sky Breaks Open

(The speaker stands alone, soaked—not only by rain, but by memory. Thunder rolls faintly in the distance.)
They tell you
when it rains, it pours—
as if suffering follows rules,
as if grief lines up politely,
one at a time, waiting its turn.
But I know better now.
I have lived the truth of it.
I have watched the sky crack open
and empty everything it had on my head
without mercy, without pause, without reason.
It began softly—
that is how disasters seduce you.
A small cloud. A dark mood.
A letter unopened.
A silence that lasted a second too long.
I said, This I can handle.
I always say that.
Humans are arrogant that way—
we believe strength is permanent,
that balance is owed to us.
Then the rain came.
First, loss.
Not loud, not dramatic—
just absence.
A chair that stayed empty.
A voice that did not answer.
I told myself grief was manageable,
that sorrow had a shape I could memorize.
Before I learned how to breathe again,
failure arrived.
Dreams I carried like sacred vessels
slipped from my hands and shattered.
Plans I had worshipped
mocked me from the floor.
And still I said, This is coincidence.
Still I believed the storm would pass.
But storms are greedy.
They do not come to visit;
they come to take over.
Illness followed—
weakening the body that once believed
it could outlast anything.
Betrayal followed—
from those who swore they would stand beside me
when the ground gave way.
One blow after another.
No space to recover.
No breath between disasters.
That is the cruelty of pouring rain—
it does not let you dry your tears
before it demands more.
I remember standing there,
drenched to the bone,
wondering what sin I had committed
to deserve such excess of pain.
I searched the sky for answers,
but the sky only thundered back.
Anger came then.
Ah, anger—
bright, burning, intoxicating.
I shouted at fate, at time, at God, at myself.
I demanded fairness from a universe
that has never signed such a contract.
And yet—
somewhere between the lightning and the floods,
something inside me shifted.
I noticed this:
the storm had not asked my permission.
But neither had it taken my voice.
Even soaked, I was standing.
Even shaking, I was breathing.
Even broken, I was still here.
That is what no one tells you about pouring rain—
it reveals what does not dissolve.
I learned which friendships were umbrellas
and which were paper promises.
I learned how shallow my pride had been,
how conditional my faith,
how fragile my certainty.
When everything fell apart together,
there was no energy left for pretending.
No strength for masks.
No patience for lies—especially my own.
I saw myself clearly then:
not heroic, not invincible,
but stubbornly alive.
The storm stripped me bare
and found I was not empty.
So yes—
when it rains, it pours.
Misfortune arrives in crowds,
suffering sings in chorus,
and pain refuses to take turns.
But hear me—
I am no longer afraid of the sky breaking open.
I have stood in the worst downpour
and discovered this quiet, defiant truth:
storms test the soul,
but they also carve it deeper.
And one day—
perhaps not today, perhaps not soon—
the rain will stop.
The clouds will thin.
The ground will breathe again.
And I,
who survived the flood,
will know that even when everything fell at once,
I did not fall forever.

Saturday, January 17, 2026
Topic(s) of this poem: betrayal,greedy,rains,storms
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