sajini G20


To A Drunkard - Poem by sajini G20

Enjoy each dropp of your
Drinks: drink how much you want
The bottle wont be emptied...
Because it is the
Tears of my heart.


Comments about To A Drunkard by sajini G20

  • (7/7/2012 2:43:00 PM)

    You have the free flow of feelings/thoughts which is no doubt can be seen in your poems but it's still half-baked (mind you 'am not a poet but as an admirer) . What you need is a good grip of the language to continue with..& the rest is history.
    For example: The Gazal which is played in the Old Hindi Movie Aaradhna it begins something like this;
    Chingaari Koi Badke, Tho Saavan usse bhujaaye..
    Saavan jo agann lagaaye...usse khon bhujaaye? ?

    Here the central theme is not disturbed and the flow continues. To reach this level no doubt takes time but its a learning factor though....one must admit.

    Way to go....
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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 20, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, June 21, 2011


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