To A Drunkard Poem by sajini G20

You have the free flow of feelings/thoughts which is no doubt can be seen in your poems but it's still half-baked (mind you 'am not a poet but as an admirer) . What you need is a good grip of the language to continue with..& the rest is history. For example: The Gazal which is played in the Old Hindi Movie Aaradhna it begins something like this; Chingaari Koi Badke, Tho Saavan usse bhujaaye.. Saavan jo agann lagaaye...usse khon bhujaaye? ? Here the central theme is not disturbed and the flow continues. To reach this level no doubt takes time but its a learning factor though....one must admit. Way to go....