Paul Gomez

Rookie - 461 Points (12/04/1984 / Syracuse New York)

To Be A Cloud - Poem by Paul Gomez

If I were a cloud, I could look down and see
The valleys, the hills, oceans and seas.

My existence would diminish,
Into fallen rain.
And continue its journey
to a gutter or

Topic(s) of this poem: cloud, weather


Comments about To Be A Cloud by Paul Gomez

  • (1/13/2016 10:40:00 AM)


    To be a cloud is a good poem, but clouds have many characteristics such as storms, lighting, and whirlwinds. Think about it. clouds can spell danger. Great metaphor. (Report) Reply

    Paul Gomez Paul Gomez (1/13/2016 1:41:00 PM)

    I agree. Clouds are rate metaphor. They can express many different concepts and emotions. If I remember correctly this was only the 2nd or 3rd poem I wrote, which would've been around 1995 when I was in the 6th grade. Now that I am older I can see the possibility of other metaphors using clouds

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 11, 2016



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