To Her... Poem by Eric Camillus

To Her...



In this world of madness,
in order to find peace..
I turn to you,
as you can put my mind at ease..
I don't know how you do it,
but you do it so well..
You set me free from my worries,
keeping my mind clear as a bell..
You give the will, strength, power
& ability to move on..
Whenever I'm bout to give up,
you lift me up with your 'songs'...
Words cannot describe what
you mean to me..
My only wish is that
I can be with you for all of eternity..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Commendable work, Eric...smooth flux throughout...Poignant expression, well employed...(check last line for a possible double-up) Solid penning! ~ FjR ~

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