To My Manny Poem by Louise Marie DelSanto

To My Manny

Rating: 3.5


I love you like the sun shining
over the barely green grass
like hurricane waves to surfers
and little boys with matchbox cars

Thinking of you I am a spider
with the scent of a live cricket
on my web, a Marathon runner
on the verge of the last mile

a sleeping baby in the arms
of her father
a little girl with a party dress
and patent leathers

And in your absence
a break in the cement where
the sand flows through, the
water flooding the main

Wanting you like a flower bending
towards the sun, the last beam
of a crimson Autumn sky,
an old woman yearning for younger days

Monday, November 28, 2005
Topic(s) of this poem: hurricane
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cantrell Dicky 28 November 2005

Your last line is excellent, it has been enjoyable reading some of your work

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