~ Today ~ Poem by Iryne Ho K. N.

~ Today ~

Today...
I've seen through you...
Your vulnerable moment...

Today...
Oh today...
My heart tied up with ache...

Grief...
Mournfulness...
When i step in the house...

Emptiness...
Wandered in mind...
Like a lost kid in the jungle...
Calling for help in your eyes...
Weak at the knees grabbing tightly...
The time i shook your hands...

Lonesomeness...
Hide underneath your shadow...
Struggle hard holding back those memories...
Here comes the Angel comfort...
Leads way out of the mist...
Life of sunshine awakes...

I hope you felt it...
The strength i charge through...
The time deepest hugs we ever commit...

Today...
Was 25th of July...
Sending my warmest condolence to you!

Tuesday, July 28, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: emptiness,july,today
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 06 August 2009

Emptiness... Wandered in mind... Like a lost kid in the jungle... Calling for help in your eyes... Weak at the knees grabbing tightly... The time i shook your hands... wow a romantic way of writing..liked this poem.. the way you done is really perfect and heart feeling one.. well done.. the verses are inter linked very professionally, , , means you are a good poet..with rich ideas..10/10

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