Together Poem by Alexis Gallagher

Together

Rating: 5.0


Before she could speak, Their lips are together
His lips were warm, And soft as a feather
She closes her eyes, Her heart skips a beat
She feels his warm hands on her, Shivers come from her feet
She pushes away, And smiles at his eyes
He told her, he will always love her, Even when he dies.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 29 June 2011

Good poem. Vivid imagery and remarkable style. I loved the way you composed the poem. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Regards Akmal

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Alexis Gallagher

Alexis Gallagher

Grand Island, Nebraska
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