Together Forever Poem by Carlos maldonado

Together Forever

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everyday without her is like a tornado taking bits and parts of my life away
but when i hear the sweet sound of her voice i feel that all that was last found its way.
now every time I'm with her i feel home and that nothing else matters
then when my arms are closed around her i feel as if theres nothing that can break the batter.
i leave her at the end of the day only to go to a place where im forced to live,
but what we know that they dont is that no matter the disstance, no matter the cost, we have each other in mind and in heart.
we go to seperate places knowing that no matter how bad things get we have each other.
so to end i have to say that at the end of the day we both know that there will be a day where we'll be together forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tye U 21 January 2010

i know this feelin thats, .. sweet u feel this way about her i know thut feelin as well doesnt everyone @-@

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Moriah Reyes 21 October 2009

LOL! ! ohh....I thought the poem was called 'dont know what to call it' and i liked that title! Then i saw Sara's comment...ohhhhh...LOL! (embarassed)

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Moriah Reyes 19 October 2009

Yip! (does the happy dance) I like the good ending to this! It won't be too much longer till ya'll can be together... everyone i know says that 2 or three years is a long time, but really it's not...time flies so quickly and if ya'll keep in contact with eachother, then nothing will be lost! Anyways...Loved the poem! ! ! Yeep! ! !

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Danny H 17 October 2009

....Aww, i have no words to describe this.. erm title? .... together forever? idk

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