Saturday, June 11, 2005

Tonight Comments

Rating: 4.8

Tonight, you are in another woman’s arms…
And I can feel it.
Nails digging into my skin, ripping, tearing,
Thin slivers of glistening flesh, stark white bone
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Sheila Papaleo
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Sheila Papaleo 24 June 2005

Thank you, Tiffany...it always helps to know that someone else can relate to these feelings. ...and thank you, John...sorry if this was little off-color. Pain can cause rage, and writing is my way of venting that rage...hope it didn't offend you.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 11 June 2005

sheila, i love these effective lines. fine poem though a bit x rated.

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Sheila Papaleo

Sheila Papaleo

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