Took My Life Poem by geraldine l. loves you

Took My Life

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this girl used to be very quiet and not cool.
until i came, she copied off me and even in school.
i thought she would be my best friend, but she's not.
she just takes all my friends and makes them act like a robot.

but she can't take over me, she cannot,
but i guess she already took everything away from me,
my friends, my things, and even my family.
my dad always talks about her, saying why can't i be a daughter like her.

but i'm not even sure,
if i like myself more then her.
it makes me hate me more and more, who i am and who i adore.
she may take it all away,

but she will pay one day
for taking my best friend away.
i can't believe they're now best friends,
started as enemies and now that has come to an end.

she even took that guy i liked,
why can't she just get her own life?
instead of taking mine and got me running like a mice.
now i got nobody to lean on,

is there any pros and cons?
i guess not, everyone hates me and i do too,
i wish i can just go in a canoe,
and keep paddling until i never see those two.

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