Friday, April 27, 2007

Torn Feelings Comments

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I don’t know why you’re scared
Show me your true feelings.
We finally kissed today,
I loved your lips against mine.
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Kimberly Santistevan
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Barbara Terry 27 April 2007

Kim this is a very good free verse poem, and flows very well too. It says volumes about feelings, relationships, caring, love, unsurety, and pain. You have written a very powerful, emotive poem. Thank you for sharing. Barbara

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