Sunday, June 12, 2011

Tough Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Let down your guard
See what I can see
Your keeping the patterns
In us all indefinitely
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Marianne Keplinger
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 12 June 2011

Nice poem. Full of great sentiments. The poem is rich in imagery and style. Great write indeed. I give it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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