Trap Guised As Sleep Comments

WOW This is what Marie a friend i Ireland calls the Double Wow poem. You spun a web of words out of nothing more than a thin membrane of desire, but how powerful and resilient is that desire. Sometimes desire strikes me as a delicate thing, because it's all about possibility, of things which are longed but not fulfilled. Not here. This desire is rooted in genuine experience, it has behind it the full of the speaker's commitment. How long can the speaker live this suspended life? ? Onlyn one who shares such a commitment to passion and fidelity coul respond!