Trapped Poem by melissa duarte

Trapped

Rating: 4.8


This room is empty,

The silence screams,

Floating thoughts,

And sleepless dreams.


Lights turned off,

Cautious motion,

Sinking deep,

In this black ocean.


Let me out,

Of my own cage,

Release my sadness,

Release my rage.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tango 02 November 2008

This is an excellent poem, it has a nice flow to it. Well done, Tango.

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Kaylee Questionable 01 November 2008

This is pretty good. Good job

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