Trapped In The Past Poem by Rhys Cadogan

Trapped In The Past



There’s this feeling inside
that thought in the mind
A worry from the past
i hope this don’t last

an emotion tearing up
my trust is corrupt
maybe I should run away
or hope none of this stays

I wish I was free
I just want to be me
Leave me alone
Please let me go home

I don’t know where this ends
Though I hope its real soon
I don’t think I can take much more
I might have to pack up and leave.

Rhys Ullah

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deangelo Townsell 31 December 2008

wow, this is good. true feelings come through with this poem. Its even better when you can relate to it. good job. good poem

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Raj Arumugam 31 December 2008

very clear lines on a universal emotion...

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Francesca Johnson 31 December 2008

Hmmm..... There's a feeling of mistrust and uncertainty here. I like this poem for it's down-to-earth quality. No soppiness, just human feelings. Fran x

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