Thursday, March 20, 2014

Tree Of Trust Comments

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After the birth of my relations,
I soon sowed a seed of trust;
Packed in the soil of truth
Deep inside the crust.
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Rhuta Joshi
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Akhil Babu 20 March 2014

hey rhuta, it's me akhil......i've read your poems.....it's just fantastic.....i've got a small correction for you....in the third last stanza.....instead of deaf year, it should be deaf ear.....

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